I've written some sales-y pages for a product that's almost finished, I'd love to get some feedback on the pages here:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/443080/landing/home.html
Is the writing bad? Is the product not well explained? Is the value proposition unclear? Would you sign up?
Please feel free to tear this apart, I'd love any input, I've been working on this by myself so I'm getting a bit stuck... Thanks!!